The Hot Air Balloon Ride
One day I went to the park and saw a man letting people on a hot air balloon. I was so excited because I had never been on one, so I ran over to my Mam to ask if we could go on it. She said yes, so I kicked my legs in the air with excitement. As we got on the hot air balloon, it went up and up and up and it never stopped. All the houses looked like little brown pieces of Lego. It was frightening when I looked down. The man started to sing a song, it was really nice but I was still scared as I didn’t think that I would go that high in the air. We started to come down very slowly back to the park, this was a great adventure and one I will never forget, when I turned around to thank the man, he and the balloon had vanished........
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Elizabeth
Nice story I like the ending
ReplyDeletewow Elizabeth, A very good story and i love the way that you end it
ReplyDeleteBrilliant :)
ReplyDeleteI love the ending Elizabeth
ReplyDeleteWow Elizabeth, I love the ending
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