MARMITE WARS
MARMITE WARS
“Ding”! Yes! Finally they were ready!
Dr McMarmite had cloned a jar of marmite in his lab, and now he had 1000 marmite jars that could:
a)talk
b)jump
c)shoot marmite!
His plan was ready for action!
His assistant came into the lab with a confused look. “I thought you hated marmite?” “no” he said “I like marmite”.
Suddenly, the doorbell rang. “I wonder who that is?” he muttered. He had, after all, a doormat saying “GO AWAY”. He opened the door. A policeman came in. “Got ya!” he shouted. His assistant had betrayed him! He had phoned the police! It was a marmite disaster.
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ReplyDeleteHi Cillian!
ReplyDeleteAs an American, I'm not familiar with Marmite so I had to do a little internet research...I'm not convinced I would like it. :)
You took a fun approach to this prompt! I also liked the how you structured your story with conversation, a list, and onomatopoeia.
Keep writing!
Francine (Team 100WC)
Twin Cities, Minnesota USA