The Lemonade Stand
I’m trying to make money. I decided to put up a lemonade stand. I told my mum what I was doing and where I was going. I grabbed ten euro and ran to my local shop.
Once I got home with lemons. I made lemonade and put my families pull out table just outside my driveway and waited for about two hours and only one customer came and tasted and walked away scratching his tongue. The next day I found out why no one bought my lemonade. I put no sugar in it.
My mum felt bad for me so she bought me a remote-controlled plane and when it was about to take off, let’s just say today was when it just wouldn’t take off, just like my lemonade stand.
Nathan Ó Riagáin
Nathan very well done, that is brilliant, brilliant writing!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of brainstorming and also did excellent work on your COPS - your Capital Letters, your Order, your Spellings and your Punctuation were top-class.
i really enjoyed your writing but in particular I thought the last time was amazing - very funny and very clever!
I can’t wait to see what you write next week.
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Ó Múinteoir Shane
DeleteThats really good Nathan 👍
ReplyDeleteWow Nathan ��
ReplyDeleteWell done Nathan, I really enjoyed your story this week. You have done a great job with the prompt. Your ending was clever and made me laugh. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMs Brennock
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Dublin
Well done Nathan great story Donnacha.
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