The Mysterious Creature
One summers’ day me and my brother Cillian
were walking in the woods.We were just about to go home when we heard a noise.
It sounded like a soft squeak.
We quickly turned around. I suddenly had this
feeling that it was a leopard.
Then Cillian reminded me that there aren’t any
in Ireland. I felt a bit better but I still felt scared. We tried to forget
about it but then we heard it again.Then it emerged….. guess what it was? ……… a
bunny. It was SO cute .We decided to bring it home with us.The bunny was very
feisty. It kept scratching me and trying to bite me. Then in the distance we
heard a woman shouting. But where did it go?, she shouted. Then she saw us. She
ran to us and said “You found her, oh you found her!” . I know what you are
thinking, WHAT is going on?
Well the lady had lost the bunny. The bunny had a really cute name. Lola
By Róisín Ní Dhúda
I like the way that your story ends up that the creature that you were afraid of was a cute bunny that someone was looking for.
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