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Saturday, February 6, 2021

The Lemonade Stand

 The Lemonade Stand


I’m trying to make money. I decided to put up a lemonade stand. I told my mum what I was doing and where I was going. I grabbed ten euro and ran to my local shop.

Once I got home with lemons. I made lemonade and put my families pull out table just outside my driveway and waited for about two hours and only one customer came and tasted and walked away scratching his tongue. The next day I found out why no one bought my lemonade. I put no sugar in it.

My mum felt bad for me so she bought me a remote-controlled plane and when it was about to take off, let’s just say today was when it just wouldn’t take off, just like my lemonade stand.


Nathan Ó Riagáin


7 comments:

  1. Nathan very well done, that is brilliant, brilliant writing!
    You did a great job of brainstorming and also did excellent work on your COPS - your Capital Letters, your Order, your Spellings and your Punctuation were top-class.
    i really enjoyed your writing but in particular I thought the last time was amazing - very funny and very clever!
    I can’t wait to see what you write next week.
    Maith an fear
    ⭐️👏

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  2. Thats really good Nathan 👍







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  3. Well done Nathan, I really enjoyed your story this week. You have done a great job with the prompt. Your ending was clever and made me laugh. Well done.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin

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  4. Well done Nathan great story Donnacha.

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