The mystery bike
One day I was walking with my Nanny and Grandad and we saw an abandoned bike. It was bright yellow and it was standing up. I was amazed by this bike. I asked my grandad about it and he told me it had been left like that for over 10 years.
The story to it made me laugh. The man who left it wore an upsidedown hat. His clothes were yellow just like the bike and he wore a spotty green tie. The man was running to catch the bus and he forgot to lock the bottom wheel. My grandad said everyone stops and looks at the bike because it is funny and he was forgetting where he left his stuff because down the road I saw a bright green bike parked with the bottom wheel at the top of the tree!
Elizabeth
I thought that this was a really good take on this week's prompt Elizabeth! I love the story regarding how the bike ended up like this and you've included good descriptive details that makes the narrative all the more clear and interesting. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteAnna (Team 100WC)