The Bike Shock
Peter hadn’t wanted it anyway. It was too old and embarrassing. His friends had new, cool racers. All he got was a rusty, old yellow bike.
The only good thing he had gotten for his birthday was his kite. It was blue with a red stripe down the middle of it and looked amazing! He had cycled to the park to fly his kite. Now it was stuck on the electricity pole.
He had tied his bike to the pole. The plan was to climb up the pole using the bike. Pity about the electricity at the top!
Qzzzzzzzzzz!
Cillian Ó hEachthairn
Well done Cillian that’s brilliant writing !
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this but in particular the last line. I wasn’t expecting that to happen I got quite a shock. Poor Peter!
I can’t wait to read your next piece of writing
Hahaha I love the ending poor Peter.
ReplyDeleteDonnacha
Your story is really funny. I like the bit where you sprayed your sister's bike!
ReplyDeleteThat was a very clever interpretation of the photograph... although I miss my old yellow bicycle.
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