The Hooded Killer
On a shocking  and
miserable  day returning from a
shocking  day at school a hooded figure
stood before me in a black cloak everything turned black.I took a step back but
he still followed me. I started to run and then he started to glide.My heart
was thumping as I ran through very dark alleys he then cornered  me hitting and punching me slitting me with a
knife.I screamed in agony but nothing happened. My flesh was falling
disintegrating then I screamed but it wasn't a normal scream  it was the scream of death.
Eoghan
Hi Eoghan,
ReplyDeleteYikes! What a piece! You've used wonderful description. You definitely had me on the edge of my seat. Nice work!
Mrs. Wlazlo in NY
Team 100