God created the Grim Reaper without a soul to collect souls.
One day he was collecting a soul and he tripped over and the soul
went into him.
He only had a couple of days to get to God and get the soul removed
But he could feel things with the soul that he couldn’t feel before.
He decided to collect one more soul before he vanished.
He disappeared while collecting the soul.
The next morning the man whose soul was last collected woke up and
looked in the mirror, he had a cloak on and a scythe.
Alex
Hi, Alex
ReplyDeleteI like your story because its very creative
It reminds me of a book I read.
I get a bit lost in the middle of it, I think you should work on that.This is my piece of writing if you would like to read it
your sicerly, Miguel.https://r4scn.blogspot.ie/2017/11/grim-reaper-miguel.html
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteI like your story because the ending is really clever
It reminds me of Hallowen
I wonder what will happen next and if the Grim reaper will get the soul out ?
Goodbye from Dara
Hi Alex,
ReplyDeleteI liked your story a lot
but I don´t really get what is going on in the middle.
Your sincerly Miguel.