Invincibility
I was in Bert’s house. He showed me
the newspaper. It read killer in black. I knew I had to save the people so I
made invincibility suits. I handed them out at the shop. The killer killed no
more after that because people were waring their suits. But who was the killer?
I figured out his den was in the park. I put on my invincibility suit and ran
into the park. I saw him I unhooded him BERT!!” But why” I asked “I wanted
people dead so I could take their money” he said. He went jail for ever.
Niamh
Hi Niamh. I loved that Bert was actually the killer! It reminds me of Harry Potter when Pr.Quirrell is always so nervous but actually he's sharing a body with Voldemort. I wonder if Bert will ever get out of jail. Bye Sadhbh.
ReplyDeleteHi Niamh love you're story nice picture's from Fionn
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