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Wednesday, 22 November 2017

Grim Reaper (Alex)


God created the Grim Reaper without a soul to collect souls.
One day he was collecting a soul and he tripped over and the soul went into him.
He only had a couple of days to get to God and get the soul removed
But he could feel things with the soul that he couldn’t feel before.
He decided to collect one more soul before he vanished.
He disappeared while collecting the soul.

The next morning the man whose soul was last collected woke up and looked in the mirror, he had a cloak on and a scythe.

Alex


3 comments:

  1. Hi, Alex
    I like your story because its very creative
    It reminds me of a book I read.
    I get a bit lost in the middle of it, I think you should work on that.This is my piece of writing if you would like to read it

    your sicerly, Miguel.https://r4scn.blogspot.ie/2017/11/grim-reaper-miguel.html


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  2. Hi Alex
    I like your story because the ending is really clever
    It reminds me of Hallowen
    I wonder what will happen next and if the Grim reaper will get the soul out ?

    Goodbye from Dara





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  3. Hi Alex,
    I liked your story a lot
    but I don´t really get what is going on in the middle.
    Your sincerly Miguel.

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