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Friday, 18 November 2016

Dialling Earth

Dialling Earth

Greetings humans of earth hi it is me peaky I am calling
from planet Mars. We supply the planet earth and all
other planet in the solar system with mars bars.We are
running short of mars bars because planet Jupiter are
using them as weapons in their war against their
enemies.We need your help urgently if anyone on planet
earth can help us solve this problem we will reward
them with a trip to planet Mars and a life time supply of
Mars bars. Please help us from your good friend
Peaky !!!

The End.

5 comments:

  1. very good I like the way that you used the sentence please help us your good friend PECKY!!! Great work!!!

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  2. I love the way you had mars bars in your story since there's the planet Mars. It was exiting the whole time.
    Róisín ����

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  3. Hi I really liked your writing. I can help. I love mars bars.
    O Sophie !

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  4. Hi, I really like your story and the use of Mars Bars it was funny. It made me feel hungry.

    Katie

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  5. I really enjoyed this it was very funny.

    Alex

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