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Wednesday, December 13, 2017

Don’t Freeze

Don’t Freeze


My name is Apple and at the moment I’m at the screen repair shop.  Do you want to know why? Well I was being used (by a monkey) to look at the world’s best banana shop when I decided to freeze for a while. I didn’t want to be mean or anything, I just wanted a break. I was looking at bananas for hours, I was beginning to go bananas! Then suddenly, the monkey went crazy and flung me across the table, I slipped off and crashed to the ground. That’s why I’m now in the screen repair shop.

                                                                                               
CONOR
Posted by Scoil Neasáin at 1:59 AM

1 comment:

  1. StMolaga5December 19, 2017 at 12:02 PM

    Well done Conor, you've done a great job with the prompt this week. I like how you have written the story from the point of view of the laptop, that's very clever.
    Keep up the great work.
    Have a very Happy Christmas.
    Ms Brennock
    Dublin
    https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

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