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Friday, November 18, 2016

Peaky

                          Peaky


Greetings humans of earth I’m Peaky I have something to tell you. I am going to space in a big balloon and there is a parachute on the big balloon. The only reason I am going up to space is because there is a big COMET coming to hit the earth AHHH !!!  
Now no need to worry scientists are trying to stop the COMET from hitting the earth. Do you think scientists CAN stop the COMET from hitting the earth ? Well I think the scientists CAN stop the COMET from hitting the earth. You can tell me what you think  !    
Bye.
                                        
 THE END      

                                                                   

By Isabel Beaddie              
Posted by Scoil Neasáin at 4:00 AM

2 comments:

  1. Ella Shannon BoyceNovember 24, 2016 at 9:30 AM

    I think that your writing was excellent!😜

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  2. AnonymousNovember 24, 2016 at 1:18 PM

    Hi, I really like your story.

    I love the interesting words you used.

    It was nice how you let people use their imagination at the end.

    Katie

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